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Age spell : PIRATES ! by Alasou Age spell : PIRATES ! by Alasou
Still with the idea of Twilight using an age spell for one day to play with her friends like kids would do. Catching the time she never had with them. I wanted to do this one since a few weeks, but didn't take time for that.

This one is one of the reasons why there wasn't much update lately.
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This is such a cute picture that I can imagine it would be hard to critique. I guess the one thing I can point out is that the water looks like syrup *YUM!* I assume the guns are carved wood, but it's interesting to know where Twilight got that cannon. More interesting would be how sturdy that sand fortress is.

But logic aside, I love how you do eyes. Hard to describe the method, but they add such childlike expression. [I hope you do a tutorial on how you draw them.] The soft coloring adds innocence, much like this scene is coming out of a storybook. And despite the simplicity, you have attention to details. The overly large hat on AJ and Pinkie submerged with a little flag on her snorkel are examples.

I have to add: Lil McIntosh is my favorite character in this whole scene. He's the only male in this troop and there just enough difference in his design to show that, without looking overly feminine and without losing that childlike quality. Nice work.

You are one of my favorite artists here on dA because your style is unique to me. Room for improvements, yes, but you are on track and ever growing. I recommend to everyone reading this critique to :+devwatch: this artist! And if there was an Adorableness rating on this critique, I'd make it a 6 star.
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Critique by PeppermintFly33 May 30, 2013, 2:23:33 PM
This is possibly the cutest thing ever! I always imagined what they would act like together, and you described that perfectly in this picture. And you also described their personalities awesomely. It seems like exactly what they would if they were kids/pirates.

Also you're detailing is incredible! Everything from the shading to the setting is perfect! But what is truly is amazing, is the expressions. It seems like you got it straight on. You also did the water really well. Specking of water, the texture is awesome. The hair, the flags, and the wood on the boat is all incredible! That's my critique, and I hope you think it's fair, so peace!
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XavierPhoenix Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
DEFEND THE BOOK FORT!!!!!
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:iconjteddav23:
jteddav23 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
This is cute.
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:iconhyginustus:
Hyginustus Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student
remind me of d-day
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:iconmusicshy:
MusicShy Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Gets A Fav~!
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:iconsuperpika293:
superpika293 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Adorable antics HO!!
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JenYeonGI Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute ><
Bravo ! :D
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ThePhoenixKing32 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is going to be fun!
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Iluvluna123 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
awsome
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cheesanyeap Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist
Actually I Spell awesome to awsome too last year
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cheesanyeap Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist
Sorry , awesome wrong spelling
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:iconiluvluna123:
Iluvluna123 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
twilight looks cute
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AskMerisstheSkeletal Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
lol... and aww...
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:iconaralaas:
Aralaas Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Man, I wish I were that good at building sandcastles.

Ooh, and Rarity is dual wielding custom pistols like a boss! :D
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:iconpersistant:
persistant Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pinkie Pie is without a doubt best submarine.
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:iconmonotonyart:
MonotonyArt Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
one of my new favorites. seriously amazing.
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:iconroxietherockstar:
RoxieTheRockstar Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How did you draw this?
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:iconlordbevan1:
lordbevan1 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student General Artist
the d'awww level is...too much...can't find my...insulin....*collapses on the floor*
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:iconvenusandrobecca:
VenusandRobecca Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Awww Applejack!!
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:iconjesserfly:
Jesserfly Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cute :meow:
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:iconpartycannon776:
partycannon776 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I spy a piratedash!
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:iconcheesanyeap:
cheesanyeap Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist
Look at Rarity....I like your style
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:iconalteser23:
Alteser23 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
Aw man, I wish my childhood could be THAT awesome
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:icondragonfire341:
dragonfire341 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
PINKIE SUBMARINE


i am favoriting this and NOPONYS gonna stop me.
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danail24 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pinkie Sub Operational!
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scottish-geeky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
i love the idea of them just offing of and having fun
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pastapiggypiggy Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X3 amazing!
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evodraconis Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
*Squee* God, they're all so adorable. Especially AJ and that hat!
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4Suit Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
2 words.....F*ck*ng adorable!
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GraybeardTheWise Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
Pinky submarine.... now thats awesome.
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:icondlazerous:
dlazerous Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
I love this picture

LOL Smarty Pants guards the treasure
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FreeWingedAlfred Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pirate Dash and Pirateshy! Cute. ^^
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:iconscourge115:
Scourge115 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
LOL LOOK AT FLUTTERSHY
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:iconcinnarabagel:
Cinnarabagel Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Pirateloo is best pirate. :>
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:icondatscootaloo:
datscootaloo Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BABBU PIRATE DASH!!! *SQUEE*SO ADORABLEEE!!!
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catz537 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is amazing!!! and it's very different since they're all fillies playing pirates xD
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:icongarciarael:
garciarael Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
I see her wings.
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AlabasterRae Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
No words that make this more than awesome (I wish I knew a few because that's annoying)
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Ashoof Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
HA! what a great picture! beware that pinkie sub!
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MimicP Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
AHuh huuhh uhhh it's adorable!!!
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matty4z Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
nice pic and i bet pinkie is gona have fun when that crab gets in there lol XD
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pinkiejack-applepie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
this is cute. but i dont know what pinkie pie hase to be pretending..
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Geminii27 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
...is Rarity wearing an engagement ring? Or is it just random unicorn jewelery?
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:iconalasou:
Alasou Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Just a random Unicorn jewelry. Totally forget that Unicorn use the horn for the engagement ring.
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harwicks-art Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow... This is an insanely fun image! Great job!
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akaiLV Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
This is pretty amazing. I like your style and the warm feel of it. It's just adorable and wonderful.
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CalicoChris Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013   Digital Artist
Awwww thats adorable :D

Also, Scoots up against Rainbow Dash?
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ShadowDancerBrony Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
Cute!
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Bluestar3445 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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Danadia Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student General Artist
That's a very cute picture!
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