Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
×




Details

Submitted on
July 9, 2013
Image Size
1.4 MB
Resolution
1450×1250
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
12,786
Favourites
586 (who?)
Comments
36
Downloads
247
×
Break by Alasou Break by Alasou
I have a tone of things I want to draw/have to draw. So let's draw something that have nothing to do with that, That I thought about a few hours ago /o/
Add a Comment:
 
:iconsunnydaysmlp:
Hello! This is my first critique, so I'm sorry if this isn't helpful.

Pro's: The detail in this piece is absolutely beautiful. I love your technique with the eyes, and the way the light shines through the tree is simply beautiful! The clouds in the background are pleasing to the eye, and I love how you included the little nozzle for Fluttershy's floatee's ^3^

Cons: My cons for this piece are the shading on Rainbowdash's hair and part of the pool. I believe you were shading it like that to depict the leaves from the tree getting in the way of the sunlight, but it ended up looking a bit...awkward, as if she has little craters in her mane. I only noticed this while taking a better look at the picture for this critique, though.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
11 out of 11 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:icondallasblack:
DallasBlack Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Adorable, adawable, and cool!
Reply
:iconmlpegasis4898:
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahahh! Love this!!! It's awesome!!! :clap: :clap: :clap:
Reply
:iconslatesadpony:
SlateSadPony Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
She's getting crumbs in the pool!
Reply
:iconm0sse:
M0SSE Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
:D
Reply
:icond3skinner:
d3skinner Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Derpy, you really shouldn't eat in the pool. Silly filly.
Reply
:iconpytko3:
pytko3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
You don't need all that Fluttershy.  You have two good friends there to make sure nothing will happen.Nod 
Reply
:iconpink-girl-of-love:
pink-Girl-of-Love Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
nice work
Reply
:iconethanpow:
EthanPow Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
shared on :iconalicornradio: 's twitter twitter.com/AlicornRadio/statu…
Reply
:iconnicolasdominique:
NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Found that at FB, so I checked for a source and that's how I found you!

Nicely done xd
Reply
:iconalasou:
Alasou Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you =)
Reply
:icong-master-artist:
g-master-artist Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
derpy and her muffins :XD:
Reply
:iconmusic-and-magic:
Music-and-magic Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
Oh Fluttershy <3
Reply
:iconmonotonyart:
MonotonyArt Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Derpy! WHAT did i tell you about getting CRUMBS in mah swimming pool?
Reply
:iconeverlastingjoy:
EverlastingJoy Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
There is something to be said about a nice cold pool on a hot summer day :heart:. By the way, Fluttershy would have all of those accessories on her, and by George is she adorable with them on.
Reply
:iconaquadragondavanin:
AquaDragonDavanin Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aaw. ^^
Reply
:icondevangiel:
DeVangiel Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
Derpy, *sigh* you're getting crumbs in the pool.
Reply
:iconkrazylec:
Krazylec Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
I can't believe how quickly you fixed up such a nice piece of art. Must be some kind of magic, man.
Reply
:iconalasou:
Alasou Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
And now I have to listen to queen...
Reply
:iconkrazylec:
Krazylec Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
It would puzzle me that you made such a connection, had I not been seized by the exact same urge as I wrote that comment...
Reply
:icondancinninjac:
dancinninjac Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Fluttershy is totally ready. I love it.
Reply
:iconmasterhunter55:
MasterHunter55 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Fluttershy the pool is like... 2 feet deep.
Reply
:iconkrazylec:
Krazylec Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
That much? Better don a swimming cap as well then. Safety first!
Reply
:iconmasterhunter55:
MasterHunter55 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah seriously, Are you absolutely sure you can handle 2 feet of water with that much safety equipment?
Reply
:iconkrazylec:
Krazylec Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Do you think this calls for complete underwater diving equipment?
Reply
:iconmasterhunter55:
MasterHunter55 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The full body scuba gear is a necessity at this point.
Reply
:iconkrazylec:
Krazylec Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Obviously. Who knows what this treacherous water could have planned!?

Dumb water.
Reply
:iconmasterhunter55:
MasterHunter55 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dumb water and it's depth...
Reply
:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw...
Reply
:icon99fluffball:
99fluffball Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
derp that muffin! it needs medical attention!
Reply
:iconredfoxj:
redfoxj Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Another stellar piece of work. This is different from previous drawings, but I can't put my finger on it yet... something with the water?
Reply
:icondaddyslittlegirl72:
Daddyslittlegirl72 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute! :D
Reply
:iconblade829:
Blade829 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
>_< soooo adorable *dies from cuteness*
Reply
:iconbluesparks4:
Bluesparks4 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
super cute!
Reply
:iconaurora-chiaro:
Aurora-Chiaro Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
That would totally be an awesome break ;p
Reply
:iconyaluckyboy09:
yaluckyboy09 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Pegasus Pool Party
Reply
:iconjackolback:
JackOlBack Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
soo cute fluttershy
Reply
Add a Comment: