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Break by Alasou Break by Alasou
I have a tone of things I want to draw/have to draw. So let's draw something that have nothing to do with that, That I thought about a few hours ago /o/
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Hello! This is my first critique, so I'm sorry if this isn't helpful.

Pro's: The detail in this piece is absolutely beautiful. I love your technique with the eyes, and the way the light shines through the tree is simply beautiful! The clouds in the background are pleasing to the eye, and I love how you included the little nozzle for Fluttershy's floatee's ^3^

Cons: My cons for this piece are the shading on Rainbowdash's hair and part of the pool. I believe you were shading it like that to depict the leaves from the tree getting in the way of the sunlight, but it ended up looking a bit...awkward, as if she has little craters in her mane. I only noticed this while taking a better look at the picture for this critique, though.
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DallasBlack Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Adorable, adawable, and cool!
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahahh! Love this!!! It's awesome!!! :clap: :clap: :clap:
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SlateSadPony Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
She's getting crumbs in the pool!
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M0SSE Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
:D
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d3skinner Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Derpy, you really shouldn't eat in the pool. Silly filly.
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pytko3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
You don't need all that Fluttershy.  You have two good friends there to make sure nothing will happen.Nod 
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pink-Girl-of-Love Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
nice work
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EthanPow Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
shared on :iconalicornradio: 's twitter twitter.com/AlicornRadio/statu…
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NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Found that at FB, so I checked for a source and that's how I found you!

Nicely done xd
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Alasou Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you =)
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