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Fluttercop by Alasou Fluttercop by Alasou
Drawing Fluttershy to fight anxiety.

Best anti-depressor ever.
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I like the colors and the style, the eyes look to me like anime or manga, funny and curious It's not something I usually see normally, I love Fluttershy and this is going directly to my usb XD a litle simple but is a bery good job, doesn't need a background but would be nice to have one, anyway this is fine the way it is, keep drawing and using your imagination, art is the expression and feelings of the people who decide make art, what you like to draw is the important thing, I would like to have something more to tell but I have no more, the shadows are fine, light level and diabetes are good LOL
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Alright, lets start with Fluttershy. First off, right off the bat, I would say the shapes and sizes of all of her legs look very off an inconsistent over all. And the posing isn't exactly dynamic or very interesting at all. Her wings also look disproportionally small compared to the rest of her. The coloring is not bad, with all the negative space and only a patch of purple watercolored on there, going on in the background the light source isn't really present? Just seems like an all over source. (On the rabbit, who I assume is angel, there's definitely a stronger sense of the light source.) I would also say that there's not a lot of personality in the picture. Fluttershy I think is one of the easier characters to portray in art because of that personality, but I don't really see any of that character brought here in her face or body language. I personally think the fluffy ears look out of place with the rest of her being smooth, and the overly long eyelashes, lack of nostril(s) unappealing, but that's a stylistic choice so that's more excusable.

My only complaints with Angel is that his legs look a little fake, and the fluff in his ears looks awkward. Otherwise, besides your style making him look different, the light source is there, and the personality is there.

I would look into applying some textures to make your fabrics and stuff stand out a bit more so they look more like, well, fabric.

Your line work is very nice and clean, and you used a nice color pallet. Plus I love the hat. Hats are hard to draw, and it looks awesome. Keep practicing, you have a lot of potential here, there's always room for improvement.
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:iconalmightybooda:
I thought that title said something else...
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:icondoughnutjoe:
I presume Mr. Bear plays the part of "good cop" in the interrogation? :)
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Capain-Caveman99 Jul 12, 2013  Student General Artist
now I want to get arrested! fuck and I already have 3 warnings!
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Donnietu Jun 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Nice one.
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Turbotowns2 Jun 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
very cute. ^^
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Pkarawalsh Jun 4, 2013  Student Filmographer
dunna nah nah nah, FLUTTERCOP!
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sooperevee Jun 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
B|
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NoteSwift May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't see a whole lot wrong, other than the face shape being a little too baby-like and wierdly shaped, and the wings being a bit too small. Do take the others' advice though!

(not long enough for a critique, didn't have much to say other than uguu .u.)
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