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Ophthalmologist appointment by Alasou Ophthalmologist appointment by Alasou
Somehow, I'm afraid this picture isn't clear at all and people wouldn't understand the not even subtle joke.
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Synopsis: Cute and just a touch ironic.

Technique: The soft, comicstrip-esque art style works with the content well and gives the image a subtle, extra layer of playfulness that adds to it's impact.

Vision: The humor is inherent in the content and delivered with a subtly that fits with the series. (By that, I should say that the picture and the series it's based on has a 'Loony Tunes' ability to be both 'sledgehammer' and subtle simultaneously.) A strabimus eye doctor for the direct impact, but having her use rebuses for her eye chart is supremely slick in the exicution.

Originality: I can honestly state that this is the first time I have encountered the compesition you have created

Impact: Being a lady who has spent most of her life visiting eye doctors, this is a beautiful and touching image that makes me both laugh and sticks with me.
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:iconzilverwing:
zilverwing Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Briliant
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:icondempsey23:
dempsey23 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
She's taking leaf of her senses.
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:iconbronyseph:
bronyseph Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh lord. This is just perfect.
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:iconfireballbrony:
fireballbrony Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol of all the ponies to be a eye doctor, its derpy <3
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:iconmightymorphinpower4:
MightyMorphinPower4 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
Lol very funny
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:icontomfraggle:
TomFraggle Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
I just came back from an eye doctor's appointment, so I can relate to this. :lol:
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:icondeejay1993:
DeeJay1993 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
The plant is in the way right
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:iconmhvenusmcflytrap:
MHVenusMcFlytrap Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For some reason this reminds me of the dentist..boy do I hate it :)
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:iconcathythehedgehog2000:
CathyTheHedgehog2000 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
cute icon >w<
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:iconmhvenusmcflytrap:
MHVenusMcFlytrap Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconcathythehedgehog2000:
CathyTheHedgehog2000 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
you're welcome :3
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:iconmhvenusmcflytrap:
MHVenusMcFlytrap Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:iconcathythehedgehog2000:
CathyTheHedgehog2000 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:3
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:iconoctaviasketch:
OctaviaSketch Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ha nice choice for doctor XD I see what you did there...and isn't the tree covering the chart thing? And there's a muffin poster on the right...:3 yay derpy :iconderpyhoovesplz: :dummy:
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:iconjediknightownsall:
jediknightownsall Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconaaahhplz: OH THE IROOOONNYYYYY!!!
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:iconazure-dragon-seiryu:
Azure-Dragon-Seiryu Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
wait what is she doin in this picture?
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:iconkaeldar:
kaeldar Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
this is the best!!
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:iconsydneyitssydneyyo:
SydneyitsSydneyYo Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:XD:
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:iconomgweegee2:
OMGWEEGEE2 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm pretty sure the joke lies within the character you chosen as the eye doctor...
right?
Or am I just an idiot who needs to visit the eye doctor again because I still can't see for crap? .-.
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:iconzoroark93:
Zoroark93 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can see two jokes here. first is the doctor, and the other is that Twili might need glasses.
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:iconcatz537:
catz537 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol xD i get it very nice. and i've always loved your style c: you make ponies so freakin adorable
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:iconxv22shasokais:
xv22shasokais Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
I have to stare at both the art and the comments, but I get the friggin' joke!

Dr. Derpy: What picture is this Twilight?
Twilight: Uhh... Green?
Dr. Derpy: No, Twilight. It's a banana. I think you're eyesight is very poor.
Twilight: Take an eye exam, they said. It'll be fun, they said.
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:iconhuskypaws123:
Huskypaws123 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
What. My brain exploded. How did Derpy even get HIERD?? oAo
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:iconcynder3601:
Cynder3601 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013   General Artist
oh the irony lol
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:iconmonotonyart:
MonotonyArt Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
And its also funny that an eye doctor would be cockeyed like Derpy is! lol!
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:iconmonotonyart:
MonotonyArt Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
<3 <3 <3 <3 Derpy!!!!!!
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:iconmonotonyart:
MonotonyArt Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I love the way you drew her in this one! very different, but so cute!
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:iconkyvex-ky-windcloud:
Kyvex-Ky-Windcloud Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I got it ...so do i get anything .....how about ...a...Muffin.
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:iconsissurrealatourium:
SisSurrealatourium Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
derpy,ur nawt a doctor
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:iconcannedcream:
cannedcream Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OH this is WAAAAY too clever and adorable not to go into my favorites.
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:iconsilvan-orion:
Silvan-Orion Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
muffin muffin muffin and...uh...I think that's a muffin
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:iconpoptartthepony:
Poptartthepony Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
oh, the irony.
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:iconrandomjellybean:
RandomJellyBean Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
plz tell me the joke im very cofunsed is the tree in the way or something
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:iconxv22shasokais:
xv22shasokais Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Twilight is taking an eye exam (?) but there's a tree in the way.
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:iconkxp71:
kxp71 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:icontwilightsparkleplz:- umm Derpy the trees in the way (I think it's time to find a new Ophthalmologist)
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:iconlost-irken:
Lost-Irken Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i get it!
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:iconcaballero-nocturno:
caballero-nocturno Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
LOL very cool xD
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:icontheponimafia:
ThePoniMafia Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
Oh, the irony.
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:iconthemam:
TheMAM Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
The irony! :XD:
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:iconsmokeybacon:
smokeybacon Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, something similar has happened to me too.
"Look straight ahead at the red square"
I would, but you're massive hairdo is in the fucking way.
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:iconancientowl:
AncientOwl Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I get it. Derpy is the eye doctor, tree is in the way of the chart, chart is food items, and as a bonus, the bog poster behind Derpy is the anatomy of a muffin.
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:icongiromcalica:
GiromCalica Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hm... Wut?
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:icong-master-artist:
g-master-artist Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is the joke derpy being the Ophthalmologist? if it is, well... that's kinda subtle i guess
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:icongarciarael:
garciarael Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
Oh boy, the tree's in the way.
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:icong-master-artist:
g-master-artist Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol, that tree was the first thing that came in mind when i read the description:
"not even subtle joke" :XD: i think i'm wrong though
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kingofraggedy Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
:iconderpyhoovesderpplz: :iconsaysplz: Now, Twilight, for the first part of your eye exam... please tell me what kind of muffin this is.
:iconwtftwilightplz: :iconsaysplz: Uh... are you sure this is part of the exam, Miss...
:iconderpyhooves: :iconsaysplz: That's DOCTOR Hooves to you, Ms. Sparkle.
:icontwilightcryingplz: :iconsaysplz: Oh I'm sorry, Dr. Hooves.
:icontwilightstareplz: :iconsaysplz: Hmm... if I had to make an educated guess, I would say that it is a chocolate chip muffin.
:iconangryderpyplz: :iconsaysplz: No. That is wrong, Ms. Sparkle. This is clearly a blueberry muffin. It should have been pretty obvious if you had good eyesight like I do. I am going to have to prescribe a pair of glasses to you.
:icontwilightcrazyplz:

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:iconjaysg2010:
JaySG2010 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
This had me in quite the fit of chuckles.
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:iconbronybyexception:
bronybyexception Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
M-U-F-F-I-no I can't see it
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:iconroxas59:
Roxas59 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
I might be blind, because I can't see the joke
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:iconhoundread:
Houndread Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
hohoho
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