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May 25, 2013
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Speed patrol by Alasou Speed patrol by Alasou
Cloudsdale's police on duty.
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OK, first, I'd like to say that his is my first critique EVER, so forgive me if its terrible.
Well, to start off, this is amazing! The shading is great, and they all just look, alive. I mostly think that's because of the expressions. I see that some people find them easier, and others much more complicated, but anyhow you got them spot on. And now comes the critical part DX Well, first of all, there's Fluttershy's wings. They're a little off, and there are only two feathers rather than the usual three or four. And (maybe its just me) RD's wings seem a tad bit to small. Fluttershy's tail seems a little off too, and it's definitely to short, and the bit of RD's tail could be a bit longer as well. I also think that it would look a little cuter if Scoot's headlight seemed to be flashing! Lastly I'd just like to comment about the BG, it's kind of missing something, some sort of deep feeling the sky normally has (don't ask, I stare at it a LOT).
Other than that I love everything about this! Its so cute how Derpy's binoculars are the wrong way around and how Fluttershy's whistle (I mean the white cloud coming out) it somewhat heart shaped! Scoot's face is just priceless! I also like Fluttershy's expression, it really reminds her yay!
Once again you did an amazing job on this! :heart:

This random 12 year old girl has said enough! =D
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Wow. Love how you shaded the picture. It just gave it a realistic touch. Love the look on Scootaloo's face. Plus, I like how you made Derpy Hooves not cross-eyed. Love Rainbow Dash's shades. It is super cute what you did with Derpy's hair, or should I say mane. Also, it looks like Flutter Shy is apple-bucking. But, now apart from the positive stuff, now some negitive. Rainbow Dash's tail is too short. Scootaloo's mane is the wrong shade. Derpy's coat is more purple than gray. Why is there fur sticking out of their ears!?!? Fluttershy's mane is behind her ear why? Her mane covers both ears. So, hope this will help you out.
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Makenshi179 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Fluttershy so cute!! >.< You just had to do a "moe" thing like this.
This is such an elite team with Rainbow Dash being the commander! The patrol is sure to catch the bad guys with speed of sound..!
Vinyl268 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student General Artist
ha ha, I can't help but laugh at scoots.
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just too adorable!!! :meow: :meow: :meow:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
Scoots' face ... priceless. :-DD
ChipTheBrony Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Awesome :happybounce: 
aany12 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Interface Designer
+fav +fav +fav 
Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
The cutest team! XD
KingArthur5 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Even her whistle is quiet! That's cute! And poor little adorable scoots.

Was about to send this and I just realized that was Lightning Dust's contrail in the bottom left! Awesome touch!
KlaviceGavin Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
Poor Fluttershy, she's blowing her whistle as hard as she can but there's no sound coming out. I wonder if it's broken? Or maybe 'Shy is too afraid to blow it any harder?

Rainbow Dash is dressed up kind of like Spitfire in "Wonderbolts Academy" but I think the two cutest ponies in this picture are Fluttershy with her cute lil' whistle and Scootaloo with her adorable siren.

How exactly did Scootaloo get on the cloud if she can't fly?
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