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Speed patrol by Alasou Speed patrol by Alasou
Cloudsdale's police on duty.
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OK, first, I'd like to say that his is my first critique EVER, so forgive me if its terrible.
Well, to start off, this is amazing! The shading is great, and they all just look, alive. I mostly think that's because of the expressions. I see that some people find them easier, and others much more complicated, but anyhow you got them spot on. And now comes the critical part DX Well, first of all, there's Fluttershy's wings. They're a little off, and there are only two feathers rather than the usual three or four. And (maybe its just me) RD's wings seem a tad bit to small. Fluttershy's tail seems a little off too, and it's definitely to short, and the bit of RD's tail could be a bit longer as well. I also think that it would look a little cuter if Scoot's headlight seemed to be flashing! Lastly I'd just like to comment about the BG, it's kind of missing something, some sort of deep feeling the sky normally has (don't ask, I stare at it a LOT).
Other than that I love everything about this! Its so cute how Derpy's binoculars are the wrong way around and how Fluttershy's whistle (I mean the white cloud coming out) it somewhat heart shaped! Scoot's face is just priceless! I also like Fluttershy's expression, it really reminds her yay!
Once again you did an amazing job on this! :heart:


This random 12 year old girl has said enough! =D
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Wow. Love how you shaded the picture. It just gave it a realistic touch. Love the look on Scootaloo's face. Plus, I like how you made Derpy Hooves not cross-eyed. Love Rainbow Dash's shades. It is super cute what you did with Derpy's hair, or should I say mane. Also, it looks like Flutter Shy is apple-bucking. But, now apart from the positive stuff, now some negitive. Rainbow Dash's tail is too short. Scootaloo's mane is the wrong shade. Derpy's coat is more purple than gray. Why is there fur sticking out of their ears!?!? Fluttershy's mane is behind her ear why? Her mane covers both ears. So, hope this will help you out.
sincerely,
paige2012
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Makenshi179 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Fluttershy so cute!! >.< You just had to do a "moe" thing like this.
This is such an elite team with Rainbow Dash being the commander! The patrol is sure to catch the bad guys with speed of sound..!
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Vinyl268 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student General Artist
ha ha, I can't help but laugh at scoots.
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just too adorable!!! :meow: :meow: :meow:
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
Scoots' face ... priceless. :-DD
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:iconchipthebrony:
ChipTheBrony Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Awesome :happybounce: 
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aany12 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Interface Designer
+fav +fav +fav 
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Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
The cutest team! XD
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KingArthur5 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Even her whistle is quiet! That's cute! And poor little adorable scoots.

Was about to send this and I just realized that was Lightning Dust's contrail in the bottom left! Awesome touch!
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KlaviceGavin Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
Poor Fluttershy, she's blowing her whistle as hard as she can but there's no sound coming out. I wonder if it's broken? Or maybe 'Shy is too afraid to blow it any harder?

Rainbow Dash is dressed up kind of like Spitfire in "Wonderbolts Academy" but I think the two cutest ponies in this picture are Fluttershy with her cute lil' whistle and Scootaloo with her adorable siren.

How exactly did Scootaloo get on the cloud if she can't fly?
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Amy-Rose-Fan123 Featured By Owner May 5, 2015  Student
She was flying in the episode ''One Bad Apple'' so... But other than that I think Rainbow Dash took her on the cloud ;P
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bronyseph Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The more I look at this, the more i like it. c:
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:iconmanasparks:
ManaSparks Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Kawaii!
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KawaiiJoltic Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
How cute! 
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:iconcaptainprower:
CaptainPrower Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Was that Lightning Dust that just blew past them?
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Alasou Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yes
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HeartStrong82 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha. Poor Scoots. She looks like shes so disappointed. 
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Mst3kforever Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
Way too adorable...
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Richter8802 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD I like the Scootalarm
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OctaviaSketch Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
guh, of course Lightning Dust is the one speeding, and Scootaloo gets to be bored...but at least she's with Rainbow Dash! Very nice, it is all well thought out :)
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MonotonyArt Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
HA! Scoot gets to be the light!
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PritzkerPrize Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Speed Limit Enforced by Pegasi...
(Ever seen one of those Speed Limit Enforced by Aircraft signs?)
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BlackDerpyNinja Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
DDDDEEEEEERRRRRPPPPPYYYYYY
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SparkyFoxes Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OH MY GOD iT'S ADORABLE!!!
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MissMeower Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Derpy :D
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SnIcK3RdOoDl3 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute! Love Scootaloo's look XD
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scottish-geeky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
i love Scoots face
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Fairytale5353 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so cute :la:
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matty4z Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
cute
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thewatcher509 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
I can only imagine if a miraculously strong wind pushes their cloud and they have an ADVENTURE
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Scarlett-scribble Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I Love Scootaloo in this! The expression with a siren on her head, you can't help but feel she's got a bum deal lol. I like rainbows outfit too, very cool!
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EverlastingJoy Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Somehow I have a hard time believing we can hear that whistle despite Fluttershy blowing as hard as she can.

Let me guess, Scootaloo rides on top of RD so Dash doesn't have to wear that dorky siren, right?
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Alasou Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Of course =)
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Freefox Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
SO much cut...:iconhnnnngplz:
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Blackwind06 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
sweet pic
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jmbeard Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
Is it me, or does Derpy have the binoculars facing the wrong way? Cute pic overall.
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HawkflightOfThunder Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconmlpderpyplz: I just don't know what went wrong
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SnipyDaSniper Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Lol lightning dust you speedy
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Kiko-The-Eevee Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ikr? XD lol
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SnipyDaSniper Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:P
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paran0i Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, Fluttershy. X3

The beautiful clean lineart and soft colors...so mesmerizing...
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DatPonyPL Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratz. The winrar is you.

Seriously, this is great :D I love it :)
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Donpedro1337 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
Wow, really cute!
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Maddog3060 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Nopony expects the Cloudsdale Inquisition!
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GiromCalica Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHUT DOES POLIEC MEEN
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noobymaniac Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Scoots is having a field day lol
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JasonSonicZombie Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Professional Writer
OMG! Scoots and Flutters are so adorable! Derpy's got one of those rape faces like she is scoping out her next victim. Lol!
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MegaPatron Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
dawww this is cute
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IceColdWulf Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwww... so cute :D
And I have to agree to Scyphi, Scootaloo is best blue light :D I'd love to get pulled over by them...
Great drawing :3
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Scyphi Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Scootaloo is best spinny-flashy light thingy. :P
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