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Speed patrol by Alasou Speed patrol by Alasou
Cloudsdale's police on duty.
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:iconcpkanimallover:
OK, first, I'd like to say that his is my first critique EVER, so forgive me if its terrible.
Well, to start off, this is amazing! The shading is great, and they all just look, alive. I mostly think that's because of the expressions. I see that some people find them easier, and others much more complicated, but anyhow you got them spot on. And now comes the critical part DX Well, first of all, there's Fluttershy's wings. They're a little off, and there are only two feathers rather than the usual three or four. And (maybe its just me) RD's wings seem a tad bit to small. Fluttershy's tail seems a little off too, and it's definitely to short, and the bit of RD's tail could be a bit longer as well. I also think that it would look a little cuter if Scoot's headlight seemed to be flashing! Lastly I'd just like to comment about the BG, it's kind of missing something, some sort of deep feeling the sky normally has (don't ask, I stare at it a LOT).
Other than that I love everything about this! Its so cute how Derpy's binoculars are the wrong way around and how Fluttershy's whistle (I mean the white cloud coming out) it somewhat heart shaped! Scoot's face is just priceless! I also like Fluttershy's expression, it really reminds her yay!
Once again you did an amazing job on this! :heart:


This random 12 year old girl has said enough! =D
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Wow. Love how you shaded the picture. It just gave it a realistic touch. Love the look on Scootaloo's face. Plus, I like how you made Derpy Hooves not cross-eyed. Love Rainbow Dash's shades. It is super cute what you did with Derpy's hair, or should I say mane. Also, it looks like Flutter Shy is apple-bucking. But, now apart from the positive stuff, now some negitive. Rainbow Dash's tail is too short. Scootaloo's mane is the wrong shade. Derpy's coat is more purple than gray. Why is there fur sticking out of their ears!?!? Fluttershy's mane is behind her ear why? Her mane covers both ears. So, hope this will help you out.
sincerely,
paige2012
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Scoots' face ... priceless. :-DD
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aany12 Dec 16, 2013  Student Interface Designer
+fav +fav +fav 
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:iconfierce-dities-link:
The cutest team! XD
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:iconkingarthur5:
Even her whistle is quiet! That's cute! And poor little adorable scoots.

Was about to send this and I just realized that was Lightning Dust's contrail in the bottom left! Awesome touch!
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:iconklavicegavin:
Poor Fluttershy, she's blowing her whistle as hard as she can but there's no sound coming out. I wonder if it's broken? Or maybe 'Shy is too afraid to blow it any harder?

Rainbow Dash is dressed up kind of like Spitfire in "Wonderbolts Academy" but I think the two cutest ponies in this picture are Fluttershy with her cute lil' whistle and Scootaloo with her adorable siren.

How exactly did Scootaloo get on the cloud if she can't fly?
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bronyseph Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The more I look at this, the more i like it. c:
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ManaSparks Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Kawaii!
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KawaiiJoltic Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How cute! 
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