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American 30 minutes challenge : Derpy and Twilight. 30 minutes for 2 characters instead of 45 usually. it’s hard.

I’ve just realized that I haven’t derped Derpy.

Today was a day off for me. I didn’t wanted to do anything, just relax. But… well… I needed to do something. (damn, in the hurry I realize that I have done some horrible mistake)
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:icondeadmanjay631:
alright critique time
i love the style of the art, it's very smooth and very bright AND very artistic.
i think you could have done a bit better on the background but they are annoying and hard to do.
it has its humor and its cuteness.
the shading is nice but not strong enough for my taste.
i like how you caught the emotions about the ponies. i think they are perfect.
Twilight=not angry but doesn't care much
Derpy=its Derpy for celestias sake :P
i like mainly the eyes and flanks of ponies cause there hard to draw (for me) and you did a good job on them.
the hair shine looks really good and i really think they are the best part of this piece for me.
i think you should have fixed Twilight's horn cause it looks a bit plain.
i would have liked to see a bit more fluffiness in the ponies fur.
i think that's all for this critique thanks for reading :happybounce:
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:iconfortunetellerkitkat:
My first critique!

I think the background could have been transparent or you could've also made it outside. I think they are both super cute in this picture, but I can't really see the derp in Derpy's eyes. 4.

I did see photos with Derpy and the mane six, not much of Derpy and Twilight. Her biting Twi's wing? No. 4.5.

I think you made it very amazing, but the eyes and the shading need some work. I can't see the pupils, but I can see the irises. 3.5

The colors blend in perfectly, the impact is mostly perfect. 5.
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:iconnice232:
nice232 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
tast like chikenDerpy Clapping Icon <img src="//st.deviantart.net/minish/stash/stashing.gif"> 
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:iconderpymabelphinabella:
DerpyMabelPhinabella Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No normNo norm
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:iconciaranbenson:
ciaranbenson Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Super awesome ^_^ Promoted you on www.facebook.com/DerpyDeLaCruz
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:iconjanapaint:
JanaPaint Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kawaiiiii! XD
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:iconjanapaint:
JanaPaint Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cute XD

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:iconkittycatisthat:
Kittycatisthat Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHY. WHY U SO CUTE.
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:iconcrazeddude4000:
Crazeddude4000 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student Artist
Derpy 
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:iconsomercet:
somercet Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
I'm sure Derpy has a perfectly rational reason to chew on Twilight like this.
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:iconironfox3000:
Ironfox3000 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013   Digital Artist
:dummy:
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:iconmonotonyart:
MonotonyArt Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
no derpy, Twiwings aren't food.
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:iconciskat:
ciskat Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Twilight, you have wings now!" *NOMS* "Ditzy, what are you doing?!"
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:iconp3r0:
P3r0 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Too cute to handle it :O
Derpy is so adorable :hug:
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:iconceraperduta:
ceraperduta Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
"I'm your royal taste-tester, Mam... and I have to let you know, you don't taste a whole-lot like royalty..."
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:iconsandwich-anomaly:
Sandwich-Anomaly Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it BURNS with aderpable-ness!
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:iconsandpath11:
Sandpath11 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Twilight: "Wha--? My wing is not a muffin..."
Derpy: *squee*
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:iconmajorbrons:
MajorBrons Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nom.
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:iconfishnchipz:
fishnchipz Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
I... How... How did i miss this ad'awwableness? This is to much! AAAHHH *Asplodes*
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:iconl-master:
L-MASTER Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
very cute and very funny :)
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:iconsweetymimy22:
sweetymimy22 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
HAHAHAHA I LOVE IT :rose: :rose:
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:icongrifin-lover:
grifin-lover Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i think its cute :clap:
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:iconpizzared34:
pizzared34 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
:)
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:iconjesserfly:
Jesserfly Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god that made my heart get diabetes and asplode X3
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:iconcaballero-nocturno:
caballero-nocturno Featured By Owner May 24, 2013
Aww so cute QwQ
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:iconbotboy41:
Botboy41 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
Oh Derpy, you are So Adorable, Love it
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:iconsearingshot:
SearingShot Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D'awww!!!!
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:icondnftt2014:
DNFTT2014 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconderpy8dplz:My teeth are usefull,your highness.
:iconalicorntwilightplz: Derpy,I'm learning from Rainbow Dash.Let go!
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:icongato303co:
gato303co Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ditzy looks beautiful with regular eyes too ^_^

She also look beautiful as a cat [link] ^__^;
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:iconstrange1331:
Strange1331 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Writer
Awww, adorble derpiness ♥ But, she's missing the derpiness of Derpy... whatever, still cute!
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:iconmisterkaos:
MisterKaos Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontwilightsparkleplz: :iconsays3plz: Uh...Derpy....
Nom...mmmh?:iconsays4plz: :iconmlpderpyplz:
:icontwilightsparkleplz: :iconsays3plz: What are you doing?
..... :iconsays4plz: :iconmlpderpyplz:
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:iconthund3r-bolt:
Thund3r-Bolt Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
*nom*
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:iconthatgeekwitheclipons:
ThatGeekWiTheClipOns Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
Silly Derpy, wings aren't for eating! ^_^
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:iconcrydius:
Crydius Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
GGAAAAAAHHHHH ! TOO ! MUCH !! ADORABLENESS 8GHHH !! DIABEETUS !!! WE MEET AGAIN ! AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH !!!! *dies*
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:iconangelskarith:
AngelsKarith Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
aww this is epic cute!
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:iconkahas:
kahas Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
Derpy is so lovely !
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:iconcommanderex:
CommanderEX Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
How cute, Derpy is trying to perk her royal highness wings, I am sure this service is very appreciated.
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:iconmaddog3060:
Maddog3060 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
:icontwilightsparkleplz: "What is this I don't even?"
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:iconnicolasdominique:
NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, this is cute ^^
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:iconmistypine01:
mistypine01 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Derpy, you so silly. ;-)
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:iconcreme-de-menthe:
Creme-de-Menthe Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Apparently Celestia made Twilight's wings out of muffin batter.
...now I'm hungry for some muffins. Time to go make some :)
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almightybooda Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
:iconlolwutplz:
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:iconenteringthenethery:
EnteringTheNethery Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
the fact that she isjust hanging on twilight just makes me laugh so hard
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:iconrenaturnip:
RenaTurnip Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
Derpy, I'm not sure that's exactly... ehh, as long as you're having fun xD
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:iconapricotrabbit:
apricotrabbit Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Derpy: *Om nom*
Twilight: Derpy, what are you doing?
Derpy: Uhhh...Sucking your alicorn essence?
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:iconmegapatron:
MegaPatron Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
Sooooo cute!
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:icongiromcalica:
GiromCalica Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
om nom nomski!
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:iconleeshajoy:
LeeshaJoy Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
"Mmm, you taste like purple!"
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:iconnintyuk:
nintyuk Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
Her derpyness is secured enough in her actions too not need the cross eyes.
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:iconmidnightwonko:
MidnightWonko Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
Derpy derped so hard that her derpiness overflowed and underpified her!

lol, she's preening Twilight's plumage for her.
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:iconsuciefue:
sucieFue Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
is that a punishable offense
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:iconstarcraft-nut:
Starcraft-Nut Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
:iconderpyhoovesplz::iconsaysplz:"Nom nom nom, om nom."
:icontwilightconfusedplz::iconsaysplz:"Derpy, what are you doing?"
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