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*nom* by Alasou *nom* by Alasou
American 30 minutes challenge : Derpy and Twilight. 30 minutes for 2 characters instead of 45 usually. it’s hard.

I’ve just realized that I haven’t derped Derpy.

Today was a day off for me. I didn’t wanted to do anything, just relax. But… well… I needed to do something. (damn, in the hurry I realize that I have done some horrible mistake)
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alright critique time
i love the style of the art, it's very smooth and very bright AND very artistic.
i think you could have done a bit better on the background but they are annoying and hard to do.
it has its humor and its cuteness.
the shading is nice but not strong enough for my taste.
i like how you caught the emotions about the ponies. i think they are perfect.
Twilight=not angry but doesn't care much
Derpy=its Derpy for celestias sake :P
i like mainly the eyes and flanks of ponies cause there hard to draw (for me) and you did a good job on them.
the hair shine looks really good and i really think they are the best part of this piece for me.
i think you should have fixed Twilight's horn cause it looks a bit plain.
i would have liked to see a bit more fluffiness in the ponies fur.
i think that's all for this critique thanks for reading :happybounce:
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My first critique!

I think the background could have been transparent or you could've also made it outside. I think they are both super cute in this picture, but I can't really see the derp in Derpy's eyes. 4.

I did see photos with Derpy and the mane six, not much of Derpy and Twilight. Her biting Twi's wing? No. 4.5.

I think you made it very amazing, but the eyes and the shading need some work. I can't see the pupils, but I can see the irises. 3.5

The colors blend in perfectly, the impact is mostly perfect. 5.
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nice232 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
tast like chikenDerpy Clapping Icon <img src="//st.deviantart.net/minish/stash/stashing.gif"> 
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DerpyMabelPhinabella Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No normNo norm
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ciaranbenson Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Super awesome ^_^ Promoted you on www.facebook.com/DerpyDeLaCruz
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JanaPaint Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kawaiiiii! XD
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JanaPaint Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cute XD

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Kittycatisthat Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHY. WHY U SO CUTE.
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Crazeddude4000 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student Photographer
Derpy 
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somercet Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
I'm sure Derpy has a perfectly rational reason to chew on Twilight like this.
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Ironfox3000 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013   Digital Artist
:dummy:
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MonotonyArt Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
no derpy, Twiwings aren't food.
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